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队一剧本细节(Final Shooting Draft)


p. 12 征兵体检

新泽西征兵站体检Steve和医生的对话:

 

Army Doctor (Cont'd):

What did your father die of?

 

Steve:

Mustard Gas.

 

The doctor looks up.

 

Steve (Cont'd):

1918. He was in the 107th Infantry. I was hoping to get assigned to them if –

 

Army Doctor:

And you mother?

 

Steve:

Few years back, she was a nurse in the TB ward. Got hit, couldn't shake it.

 

Finally, the doctor shakes his head.


Steve (Cont'd):

They weren't weak, doc; they were fighters. If you just give me a

 

Army Doctor:

Sorry, son. You'd be ineligible on your asthma alone.

 

Steve:

You can't do anything?

 

Army Doctor:

I'm doing it. I'm saving your life.

 

The doctor stamps Steve's file: 4F. 



p. 15 后巷争斗

Bucky在电影院后巷阻止霸凌者的场景

 

The jerk knocks Steve back into a pile of garbage. He moves to hit him…But someone grabs his arm.

 

Bucky:

What's with all the fighting?

 

The jerk spins to see a soldier, James"Bucky" Barnes.

 

Bucky (Cont'd):

Don't you know there's war on?

 

"Don't you know there's war on?" 和电影台词 "Hey, pick someone your own size"意思相近,讥讽霸凌者没胆上战场打纳粹却在后巷欺负比自己弱小的人。

 


pp. 15-16 & p. 19 四人约会

Steve旁边的是Bonnie, Bucky身边是Connie. Steve递给Bonnie一包花生,然后被嫌弃了。剧本里Bucky没和妹子跳舞,只是去喝巧克力苏打。"Remember, when you attack, you run toward the enemy." 在电影中换成了 "I can't. You are taking all the stupid with you.”原句更有斗嘴的感觉,后者似乎更连贯。还要强调一下语气是 "affectionately". Bucky在明日世界博览会后大概去了教堂。所求也许是赢得战争,平安归来,家人朋友健康快乐一类……不知他是否获得了回应。


Steve frowns, taking in Bucky's uniform.

 

Steve:

Looks like you got your orders?

 

Bucky:

The 107th ships to England first thing tomorrow.

(Beat)

This is my last night.

 

Steve:

So, what's the first stop. Church?

 

Bucky grins.

 

Bucky:

Yeah…maybe second stop.

 

They start walking out of the alley.

 

Steve

Where are we going?

 

He whips a newspaper and hands it to Steve.

 

Bucky:

The future.

...

Steve offers Bonnie a peanut. She looks at them with scorn.

...

Steve stares at a mirrored booth in front of the recruiting pavilion: "Your duty: try it on for your size!" A burly man stands in front of the mirror. He looks big and heroic in uniform. Now Steve steps up. In the mirror, he now wears A. G. I. uniform. His disap2ointed eyes barely see over the collar. Just then, Bucky clamps a hand on his shoulder.

...

Bucky:

You're kind of missing the point of a"double date." Come on, we're gonna get a chocolate soda.


Steve:

You go ahead.

 

Connie

Hey, Sarge, we gettin' sodas?


Bucky

Yeah, we are.

 

Annoyed, Bucky walks to Connie. Then, he stops, thorn. Finally, he turns back to Steve.

Bucky holds out his hand. Steve sees his friend's genuine worry. He shakes his hand.

 

Bucky (Cont'd):

Promise me you won't do anything too stupid before I get back.

 

Steve:

Remember, when you attack, you run toward the enemy.


Bucky:

(Affectionately)

You're a punk.

 

Steve:

(Affectionately)

You're a jerk.


p.28 遗嘱

Carter特工的初次登场。自我介绍之后她要求参选士兵写遗嘱(但Steve的军队档案表明他没有亲属,也不知道最终写给了谁),Hodge因为说混话被揍。

 

Peggy Carter (Cont'd):

Gentlemen, my name is Agent Carter. I will be supervising your induction today.

 

She passes out papers and clipboards.

 

Peggy Carter (Cont'd):

To begin with, I shall need you to complete this document.

 

Steve reads it: "Last will and testament."Two guys next to him look at each other nervously. Steve's not fazed.


pp. 42-43 

注射血清前和Peggy在车上的谈话。


Peggy Carter:

You must have at least danced.


Steve:

Standing on my mom's feet when I was seven. I don't know. Asking a girl to dance seemed so terrifying, and them in the last few years it didn't seem so important. I figure I might as well wait.


Peggy Carter:

For what?


He shrugs, looking out the window.


Steve:

The right partner.



pp.70-73 卖国债

血清成功后,Steve Rogers被派去卖国债的地方:

  • Buffalo 水牛城

  • Milwaukee 密尔沃基

  • Kansas City 堪萨斯城

  • Philadelphia 费城

  • Chicago 芝加哥

  • New York City 纽约市



pp.84-85 军营巡演

1943年10月,USO来到离意大利前线五英里的军营巡演。

The guy moons him. The GI's laugh. Somebody throws a tomato. Steve has to block it with his shield. As the chant "Bring back the girls" becomes roar.The rain falls. Steve, in an overcoat, sits on the edge of the stage. He sketches: A chimp dressed as Cap rides a unibycle. 


 

p.92 解救行动

剧本中Bucky被关在笼子里,还被打了。Steve砸开锁把他救了出来。

 

Steve walks inside,wary. Past the scattered files and specimen jars, he sees…the large atop arusty drain. A prisoner lies slumped against the bars. On hearing Steve'sfootfalls, he calls out wearily.


Prisoner

Barnes, James Buchanan. Sergeant.

32557038

 

Steve grapes, stunned. He can't believe it.

 

Steve:

Bucky?

 

Silence. The prisoner doesn't respond. Then:


Bucky:

Who…who is that?


Steve races to the cage. We can now clearly see a beaten, grizzled Bucky Barnes staring out. Buckysquints, unable to focus. He seems to have aged 10 years.


Bucky (Cont'd):

Is that…

 

Steve smashes off the lock. He hold his hand, grinning.


Steve:

It's me, Buck.

 

Bucky studies his friend's face.

 

Bucky:

Steve? 


Steve:

I thought you were dead.

 

Bucky:

I thought you were smaller.


Steve gently helps him down from the cage. Bucky gapes up at his transformed, much taller friend.


Bucky (Cont'd):

What hap2ened to you?

 

Steve:

I joined the army.


Bucky:

Did it hurt?

 

Steve:

Little bit.

 

Bucky:

Is this permanent?

 

Steve:

So far.

 

Bucky:

You are going toget so many girls. 



p. 98 武器工厂

Bucky刚到对面,金属支架就断了。

 

Bucky jumps from the end of the gantry to the other side. Just then, another bomb explodes. The gantry collapses. Steve, stands alone, trap2ed. Bucky looks around, frantic.

 

Bucky:

There's got to be a rope or something –


Steve:

Just get out!

 

The explosions come faster now. Boom! Boom! Boom!

 

Bucky:

Not without you.

 

The roof around Steve falls in. he eyes the impossible gap.


Steve:

Aw, hell.

 

He backs up, then races for the edge. Bucky's eyes go wide as…Steve leaps, sailing over the blazing chaos. Just as the biggest bomb yet goes off. Ka…Boom!


p.103

回军营接受欢呼时人群中有个小护士问Bucky:" Where do you hurt, soldier?"


pp. 106-110

位于伦敦的小酒馆: "The Whip and Fiddle Pub". 其他成员表示加入咆哮突击队之后Steve和Bucky的对话:

 

Steve shrugs and turns to Bucky.

 

Bucky:

That was the easiest battle of the war.

 

Steve:

How about you? You gonna follow Captain America into the jaws of death?

 

Bucky:

Hell no. that little guy from Brooklyn who was too dumb to run from a fight? I'm following him.

 

Bucky nods at a tour poster of Captain America:"Performance cancelled – not to be rescheduled."

 

Bucky (Cont'd):

But you're keeping the outfit, right?

 

Steve:

Don't get you hopes up. It's not exactly regulation.

 

Bucky:

I dunno. You saw those guys in Italy when you came back. 

(Beat)

I don't think they were cheering just for you. 


(Peggy走进酒馆)


The invaders start singing again. Terribly. 


Peggy Carter:

I see your crack squat is prepping for duty.

 

Bucky:

You don't like music?

 

Peggy Carter:

I do, actually.

(eyes on Steve)

I may even, when this is all over, go dancing.

 

Bucky grins and nods at the dance floor.

 

Bucky:

What are we waiting for?


Peggy Carter:

The right partner.

 

She smiles and heads out.

 

Peggy Carter (Cont'd):

08:00, Captain.

 

Steve:

Yes ma'am. I'll be there.

 

Bucky stares, puzzled. Steve pats him on the shoulder.


Steve:

Maybe she's got a friend. 



pp. 108-120 咆哮突击队

咆哮突击队拔掉的Hydra据点:

  • 1944年1月,比利时

  • 1944年2月,波兰

  • *1944年4月,丹麦(队一前导漫)

  • 1944年8月,(前)捷克斯洛伐克

  • ?,希腊(红骷髅 "You're failing" 那段)

  • *?,列支敦士登(队一指南,剧本中未出现)


pp. 123-125 火车任务

Russia, 1945


Steve checks his rifle. Bucky looks over the cliff's edge.

 

Bucky:

Remember when I made you ride the Cyclone at Coney Island?

 

Steve:

And I threw up?

 

Bucky looks overthe edge, leery.

 

Bucky:

This isn't payback, right?

 

Steve looks up with a grin.

 

Steve:

Now why would I do a thing like that?

 

Bucky:

Jerk.

 

Steve:

Punk.


【导演,这段对话最后两句去哪了?】



pp.127-128 装甲列车

装甲列车上和Hydra士兵的战斗。

这段的剧本太可怕了……Steve冲过去抓住了Bucky的手,想把他拉回来。Hydra的激光武器再次开火,Bucky的胳膊汽化成蓝色的雾。他从装甲列车上掉了下去,坠入无底峡谷。

 

The trooper turnsback to Steve as he gets to his feet. The trooper aims at the star on Steve's chest. Bucky grabs Steve'sshield off the floor and leaps in front.

 

Steve:

Bucky, no!

 

Blam! The cannon fires, hitting Bucky square in the shield…Blowing him through the hole in the wall. With a last desperate effort, Bucky snags the jagged edge. The trooper's weapon is momentarily spent by the blast. As it starts to power back up…Steve lunges, grabbing Bucky's slipping hand. Steve starts pulling him back in. Then…blam! The trooper fires, vaporizing Bucky's arm into a blue mist…Bucky's body whips away, tumbling into a bottomless gorge.


Steve reaches out in anguish.


Steve:

Bucky!


The only response is wind and theclatter of train wheels. The trooper takes another step.Steve grabs his shield and turns, enraged. The trooper fires. This time,Steve holds on, knocking the blast away with his shield. He advances.



pp. 132-133

Steve在炸毁的小酒馆和Carter的对话。

 

Peggy Cater:

It wasn't your fault.

 

Steve:

You read the report?

 

Peggy Cater:

Yes.

 

Steve:

Then you know it wasn't true.

 

Peggy Cater:

You did everything you could –

 

Steve:

I got in over my head. Bucky waded in and pulled me out, just like he always did. And the one time he needed to return the favour, I couldn't.

 

Peggy Carter:

I doubt it's that simple.

 

Steve:

All I had to do was hold on.

 

Peggy Carter:

Did you believe in your friend? Respect him?

 

He looks up at her. Of course.

 

Peggy Cater (Cont'd):

Then stop blaming yourself. Allow Barnes the dignity of his choice. He damned well must have thought you were worth it.


Steve stares at the beer.

 

Steve:

As soon as I finish this, I'm going after Johann Schmidt. I'm going to burn out every hole there is for him to hide in. and I'm not going to stop until he and all Hydra are captured or dead.



p.157 举杯

二战欧洲胜利日,咆哮突击队成员在重建的小酒馆为Cap举杯。


 

p.164 七十年后

Steve Rogers从冰中苏醒。冲出神盾观察室。

 

Steve looks around, stunned.

 

Steve:

Seventy...

(sledge-hammered)

The world of the future.

 


源:

Marvel's Captain America: The First Avenger: The Screenplay (by Christopher Marku & Stephen McFeely)

图片来自亚马逊



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